Thread:Mechemik/@comment-24729554-20161009132404/@comment-27075564-20161009202923

Ah sorry. I was using it to mark it because I wasn't sure yet if it should be fixed up to only be told from Adam's prespective. Otherwise, some parts of it read like what's off the HR page (like the first chapter already reveals stuff you don't find out until much later in the story).